Music magazine pitch

PITCH EVALUATION
i think my magazine pitch went well, in the picth i included nearly every feature people would want to know about my magazine, changes i have made are that i originally priced my magazine at £4-£5 now overlooking this pricing and from the feedback/ comments made i am going to lower it to around £3.50 so its more affordable and appeals more to the age goup i am aim to, i also am changing my target age from 15-25 to 17-25 because from the feedback i feel this would be more appropriate.